At the end of the crit this term tutors told me to continue working on my structure having the same structure going throughout the whole building. I also need to complete my drawings with line weights and clearly need to improve the quality of my images/ presentation/ and layout of my pages. Any tips and comments will be greatly appreciated! Be as brutal as you like.
I really like your section Saoirse, its nice work, especially with the people sat on the steps. I think you could maybe even put it on a page of its own with the detail you have, or add some context to the section. It will look really good for your design report as well, when photoshoping its environmental considerations.
The smaller images look good although I think they might work better on your development page to show the progression of your initial concepts.
Also for your other page I can see the link in your inspiration from your plans, would be nice to see some images enlarged, to show more hierarchy on the pages. Good stuff though, I like the strong theory behind your scheme!
Yeah i agree with Lydia. Your section is looking so good put it on a page of its own in context. Or flip the page horizontally with the section in its wider context and have the other images smaller and running along the bottom?
At the end of the crit this term tutors told me to continue working on my structure having the same structure going throughout the whole building. I also need to complete my drawings with line weights and clearly need to improve the quality of my images/ presentation/ and layout of my pages. Any tips and comments will be greatly appreciated!
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I really like your section Saoirse, its nice work, especially with the people sat on the steps. I think you could maybe even put it on a page of its own with the detail you have, or add some context to the section. It will look really good for your design report as well, when photoshoping its environmental considerations.
ReplyDeleteThe smaller images look good although I think they might work better on your development page to show the progression of your initial concepts.
Also for your other page I can see the link in your inspiration from your plans, would be nice to see some images enlarged, to show more hierarchy on the pages. Good stuff though, I like the strong theory behind your scheme!
Yeah i agree with Lydia. Your section is looking so good put it on a page of its own in context. Or flip the page horizontally with the section in its wider context and have the other images smaller and running along the bottom?
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thank you for your comments girls..they are really useful! hope your work is going well.
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