great sheet buddy, I see what you meant about plans. Structure sheet could maybe include a few connection details for the sake of one image. i know you want to keep it simple though..hmmmm
Lovely presentation... I think the structure sheet is so self explanatory you don't need much more. Maybe layer up the sections a bit more to give them more character, and show interaction with the context?
Also, in your plans you have really strong shading going on from the exterior surfaces of your building, which is cool, but because you don't have the same level of contrast on the shading inside your building it detracts from the internal spaces? xxx
Good work jack - i was just wondering on your page where you have your rendered model titled form and construction...i really like the look of your exploded visual
- i was wondering if you have used any specific detail or system for the facade construction of the transparent window with the algae tubes running through them? as the window is flush top to bottom of that side of the facde? Just because it is similar to what i am trying to achieve...and am currently looked at differnt sectional facade details at the mo!
thanks people, i agree with what you say emma, still am playing around with an overall look and style for my presentation, and i think it will come across in my drawings too. sarah - i am using Rodeca's polycarboinate facade, herzog and de meuron used it on the laban dance centre in london, have a look at it, rodeca have all of their publications with drawings on their website.
great sheet buddy, I see what you meant about plans. Structure sheet could maybe include a few connection details for the sake of one image. i know you want to keep it simple though..hmmmm
ReplyDeleteLovely presentation... I think the structure sheet is so self explanatory you don't need much more. Maybe layer up the sections a bit more to give them more character, and show interaction with the context?
ReplyDeleteAlso, in your plans you have really strong shading going on from the exterior surfaces of your building, which is cool, but because you don't have the same level of contrast on the shading inside your building it detracts from the internal spaces? xxx
ReplyDeleteye, i'd say take down the blue brightness
ReplyDeleteGood work jack - i was just wondering on your page where you have your rendered model titled form and construction...i really like the look of your exploded visual
ReplyDelete- i was wondering if you have used any specific detail or system for the facade construction of the transparent window with the algae tubes running through them? as the window is flush top to bottom of that side of the facde? Just because it is similar to what i am trying to achieve...and am currently looked at differnt sectional facade details at the mo!
thanks people, i agree with what you say emma, still am playing around with an overall look and style for my presentation, and i think it will come across in my drawings too.
ReplyDeletesarah - i am using Rodeca's polycarboinate facade, herzog and de meuron used it on the laban dance centre in london, have a look at it, rodeca have all of their publications with drawings on their website.