What is the function of your building? Would be cool to see some montages of it on site, to see its context and how it compares to the buildings around it.
The middle three images are the best, nice use of contrast and good perspectives.
I think if you can perfect this style of presentation for your portfolio it would be great, perhaps start playing around with some fonts, keeping to the grayscale as much as possible, but the inclusion of bold colours as a highlight will be really effective.
Very strong and effective images Ben.
ReplyDeleteWhat is the function of your building? Would be cool to see some montages of it on site, to see its context and how it compares to the buildings around it.
The middle three images are the best, nice use of contrast and good perspectives.
these were from our final crit, still working on final
ReplyDeleteI think if you can perfect this style of presentation for your portfolio it would be great, perhaps start playing around with some fonts, keeping to the grayscale as much as possible, but the inclusion of bold colours as a highlight will be really effective.
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